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CRIMEWEEK

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Ronan Gallagher

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SPACE. 200 MILES ABOVE THE EARTHS SURFACE

SOUND OVER MORSE CODE, MILLIONS OF RADIO SIGNALS, TV SOUND BYTES AND ALL THE GAMUT OF RADIO AND TELEVISION SIGNALS EMANATING FROM EARTH.

CREDITS OVER

Cold space.

The beautiful mass of blue and white that is Earth rolls slowly into frame as camera turns and passes over in a lonely orbit of the planet. Various clouds and weather systems hover gracefully over the continents and oceans as the planet rolls past.

Whoosh…A Satellite passes close by going in the opposite direction followed by some space debris as we orbit into the night side of Earth, the speckled lights of its various cities glimmering like gold dust in the distance.

Whoosh…..Past another Satellite…. and

Whoosh…past another as we continue to circle the Earth and on around the curvature of the Earths dark side until, over the horizon the first rays of the sun appear again.

Whoosh…….more space debris hurtling aimlessly, in eternal orbit.

The  Suns rays getting stronger as a beautiful crescent begins to rise over the Earth's horizon. In the distance a huge Satellite approaches, bigger than anything we've seen before and temporarily blocks out the growing crescent of the Sun.

Whoooosh……..As we pass over its huge mass a large insignia can be seen on its topside with the words

SANEX CORP. N.E.S.S. imprinted on it.

As we swing past the Satellite suddenly, without warning we start to plummet towards Earth gathering speed. Down towards the outer atmosphere, through the much depleted ozone layer, down through the clouds and weather systems and out into

SCENE 2

EARTH 30,000 FEET

Into open blue sky, crisp and clear,  plummeting down as underneath us the outline of a huge metropolis begins to form thousands of feet below.

Camera plummets on down, the city looming larger by the second, the shapes of the buildings and structures becoming clearer as we close in. Many incredibly tall buildings dot the city and most are interconnected  by a high rise rail network which is suspended half way up their huge structures high above the grid like pattern of the surprisingly quiet streets. 

At the center of the city, towering above everything else, stands a huge structure of glass and steel adorned on top with a huge radio satellite rotating slowly, its massive mast jutting upwards.

The words  N.E.S.S CENTRAL CONTROL are emblazoned across the huge diameter of its receiver dish.

Close on the satellite as its mast slowly swings around to camera. Close on the point of the mast and Whoosh…….. in through the point of the mast

SCENE 3

INTERIOR COMPUTER ELECTRONIC SYSTEMS

Now traveling at incredible speed through the very wires and cables that make up the electronic and computer network of the buildings massive computer systems.

FX myriad of brilliant colours streaming past and flashing strobes from tiny electrical impulses as we hurtle through the electronic systems the sound of a million voices all mixed up and compressed together, a virtual tower of Babel ringing in our ears and growing in intensity.

In the distance a point of light which looms larger by the second. A distorted face can be seen as we approach from inside the computer network and

Whoosh………Out through a computer screen to

SCENE 4

INTERIOR N.E.S.S CONTROL ROOM DAY

Entering the room through the computer screen we slow to almost a stop. The distorted face seen earlier now fills the screen. It is that of a spectacled man, one of the many workers in central control, his monitor screen reflecting in his glasses as he busily types in data to his keyboard. Camera slowly orbits around his head in silence, mirroring its earlier Earth orbit. Suddenly the sound of the busy room fills the soundtrack as camera veers off and journeys on through the control room. Sound bytes of various radio transmissions, the click of computer keyboards, the whirring of various printers, white noise and static mixed with snippets of conversations among  passing staff, some issuing orders or giving status reports, others engaging in light hearted conversation as we pass, people going about their business, TV monitors and computer terminals flash all sorts of data on their screens from binary code to sound bytes from various TV station broadcasts, all the technology and people power that is Ness Central Control. Passing slowly through the room one voice slowly rises over that of all the others.

 V/O MAN

Information has to be stored somewhere. Gathering such huge amounts of data every minute as Ness does brings with it its own unique set of problems………

Panning slowly past an array of flat screen TVs from which the face of a distinguished looking man in his late fifties speaks. 

 MAN

The question of storage and analysis of such huge volumes of information cannot be answered easily and whilst I accept Crimeweek is an unacceptable option, sadly it still remains our only option. However I want to assure the public that we at Sanex are working flat out to reach the point of zero shutdown, and let us not forget the four years and fifty one weeks during which The Network Electronic Surveillance Satellite keeps our society totally crime detectable and in the main, near totally crime free………..   

The TV screens pass out of camera shot as we continue on our journey through the room. Pick up on a camera crew conducting an interview.

CUT TO

Close up CNN type reporter talking to camera.

REPORTER

That was Walter Drago Chief Executive of Sanex Corporation whom we spoke to earlier.With me now live from Central control is Milt Haines the man in charge of shutdown here in central control…..Mr Haines why is it that with all the technology available to us we still have to have this shutdown and suffer the ensuing chaos that has become known as Crimeweek.

CUT TO

CLOSE UP MILT HAINES

HAINES

Well Ruth as Mr Drago has pointed out the massive amount of information that NESS gathers is where the problem lies. Here at central control Ness`s huge computer gathers, stores, analyses, and sorts all that information in its own memory banks. That takes an awful lot of processing power but its power is ultimately limited to its memory when it comes to information storage so it has to dump all of that information at some point to make room for more  We simply have not been able to build the storage space needed for such vast amounts of information ahead of Ness`s need to empty its memory banks.

 

REPORTER(Interrupting)

What your saying is that Ness is collecting information quicker than you can build places to store it?

 HAINES

Its not as simple as you make it sound but yes, that’s essentially the problem.

 REPORTER

After years in the wilderness and once Sanex`s fiercest critic, it came as quite a surprise to a lot of people that Mr Drago appointed you as systems manager at Central control…..

HAINES(Interrupting)

Mr Drago did not appoint me. The board of directors did and as you saw in their much  publicized directive, my primary objective was, and still is to achieve zero shutdown status in the five years time span between now and the next shutdown ending the necessity of society ever having to go through a Crimeweek again.

 REPORTER

But not this time…….

 HAINES

Unfortunately until we reach such a time, shutting down the system for one week every five years to empty its memory banks is as Mr Drago says, the only option available to us.

 REPORTER

What do you have to say to those who say you have been bought by Sanex.

Haines, is stung by this but holds his composure.

HAINES

I don’t think you'd want to hear that on prime time TV…

 REPORTER

Wouldn't you like to…..

A public address system calls out.

 PUBLIC ADDRESS VOICE

Attention. Shutdown procedures begin in five minutes.All guests and non essential personnel to vacate the building immediately. Repeat. Shutdown procedures begin in 5 minutes.

 HAINES

I'm sorry. Times up. You're all going to have to leave now…..We have to finish…. Thank you……

Haines uses the interruption to politely but firmly close the interview and walk away. As he does so he is approached by Jim Riebeck his deputy controller. An older man workmanlike in rolled up shirt sleeves and a pencil behind his ear Riebeck beams a big friendly smile at him. Reaching Haines he pats him on the back.

 RIEBECK

Well done Milt. You handled that well.

Riebeck glances in the direction of the reporter and camera crew who are preparing to leave.

 RIEBECK (To himself)

…..Smartass reporters…..Obviously one from Drago`s harem…..

Haines overhears him and mocks surprise.

HAINES(Jokingly)

 Jim …. That’s no way to talk about our glorious Media.

 RIEBECK

Yeahhh I know…… They do their job and we do ours. I just wish they wouldn't look like they're enjoying it so much. Any word on Anne?

 HAINES

Not yet. She's not due for a few days.

RIEBECK

Looking forward to being a daddy?

PUBLIC ADDRESS

Attention. Attention. Shutdown procedures to begin in 4 minutes. All essential personnel to their stations .  All non-essential personnel and guests to vacate the building immediately.

HAINES

Yeah. But first we gotta get this show on the road. Come on.

Haines flanked by Riebeck walks to the center of the room clapping his hands over his head to gain everybody's  attention. After a moment the room goes quiet. Everybody looks to him.

HAINES

Ok people. That’s our cue. Back to your stations. In fifteen minutes it'll all be over and we can all get home to our families and loved ones. Lets get to work.

 He smiles at them reassuringly.

 HAINES

Oh! And of course a safe and peaceful Crimeweek to you all.

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