Creative Writing

 

 
 

CREATIVE WRITING 

An Adventure in Space (COD)

                                                               

One day we were watching television. Then we heard, we want two people to go to outer space to defeat the aliens who are going to try to invade earth. If you want you want to, phone 6704555555555.

Then I stood up and said, "I accept your challenge". I phoned my super partner Psycho Paul. I asked him, "Want to go to outer space". He said, "yes I will ". After I phoned him I dialled 6704 555 555 555.

The man said " Congratulations, You’re our 20th caller. You’re going to outer space! I took a leap of joy and shouted "yahoooooo". My mother shouted "

What’s all that racket?" Its me, Mam" I shouted, "I’m going to space". Immediately Mammy dropped the frying pan and said" what, are you joking?" I said" no I’m not joking ". The next day we heard the results.

But I didn’t listen because I knew that we won .We drove to the place where our rocket was waiting .We got in it was amazing .The countdown

was starting 5, 4, 3, 2, 1, 0, blast off!

It was exiting. I was actually going to space. When we landed it was crowed with aliens.            

They were hard to defeat. It all came down to my super zapper. It was deadly. I zapped everyone of them. But that was only the beginning. The leader came out. I was terrified. We couldn’t possibly beat him. But then I had an idea. I told Psycho Paul to go to the ship and get the other super zapper. I said", two are stronger than one". So he went to the ship and got the other super zapper. Then we had the strength to defeat him.

When we came back to Earth we were treated like and were presented with medals.

 

An Adventure in Space (BW)

My partner and I stepped into the space-shuttle and braced ourselves for the fearsome take off the robotic voice announced "5…….4……..3……..2…….1…..blast off!" I was ready to start my mission.

 

I was in Space, actually ready to discover secrets unknown to man, "Are you ready for the worst? " I asked my partner. "Yeah! If you are," he replied, now we were in space and no one could say other wise.

Suddenly in red and black writing a sign saying, "malfunction" appeared. "Oh no!" I cried. It’s goin’ to be fine, all we have to do is land on a planet," he explained. He was right it was the only thing we could do.

So we steered lightly into the atmosphere of the planet Mars. It was the most fearsome ride I ever had, I was suddenly pushed back in the chair by the pressure, I was definitely terrified. I wanted to what happened next.

After the fearsome ride through the atmosphere I kept twitching. We stayed in the space shuttle for a while till the side effect wore off. It was fun floating around after all the stress.

I opened the rocket door to find dusty red ground. I stepped on the planet (right foot first) and stuck the Irish flag deep into the dusty ground. I was proud to be the first to step on Mars (My partner came after me).

So off we went to explore this strange planet. We found big and small craters and dips the size of the Grand Canyon. My partner and I struggled up mountains and leaped over dips.

I suddenly tripped over a spike in the ground, " What the heck" I said. It was a green Alien with a strange suit. I wondered if they knew we were humans. They started to sprint away all of a sudden.

I was shocked to see Aliens but I knew I would have to get its D.N.A. for scientific reasons. So off I went with my vaporizing gun (as protection) to complete my mission.

I climbed down the dusty mountain to where I last saw the Aliens. It was now quiet and spooky but there was no sign of them any more. I saw then in the distance a glass dome with things like guards outside.

I reached them with my gun in my hand and my partner at my side. With six blasts of my gun, all guards turned to vapour. I knew this would not be easy but someone’s got to do it I thought.

We were about to enter the alien empire! It was not like outside, there were buildings the size of skyscrapers everywhere and aliens were twice as big and ugly. I then walked to the biggest, tallest and widest building of all.

I stepped inside experiencing fear and excitement not knowing where to go. I went one room to find an alien fast asleep, I scanned it and then vaporized it so it would not cause me trouble. I raced back to the ship down to earth (in 2 days) and stayed in the quarantine unit for a couple of weeks.

      This space story will continue in years to come...........

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